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Friday, May 21, 2021

create task 1 by oli

hi guys this week i have been doing EARTHQUAKE 
hi guys this week i have been doing EARTHQUAKE this book is about ellie she wakes up in the middle of the night and she heard rumbling she got out of her bed and it was hard to stand ellie thought about what her teacher told her what to do if there was an EARTHQUAKE  and ellie remembered that the door wasnt the safest place cause the door could fall so she got up and yelled MUM MUM!!!!! ...

2 comments:

  1. hi oli i like your create task and it has details maybe next time you can put a walt ;)

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  2. Hey Oli i like your work it looks amazing i am really proud of you but maybe next time you could talk about like who she was worried about because she was worried about her cat billy and next time you could at some full stops but im proud of you keep it up Oli.

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